Friday, September 13, 2013

Alliteration poetry

The students in Room 4 have had great fun in the last two days creating tongue twisters and alliteration poems about animals.  It has been especially fun to read them aloud to our classmates.  Here are a few snippets from our poems - you will have to wait to see the final published poems.

Limping lamb likes licking lovely lollipops. (Alyssa)
Freaky fish frighten friendly fishermen. (Lucy)
Humungous hippopotamus hugs Harold.  (Blake)
Wobbly wombats wander about for walnuts.  (Emma)
Terrible tigers tore a turtle like a toy.  (Connie)
Wildlife wide weka does the wiggle waddles walk.  (Rubie)
Lions like licking lollipos in the sun.  (Lanie)
Cruel crocs crawl quite quickly.  (Alesana)
Magnificent monkeys munch mosquitos and get malaria measles.  (Jessica)
Giraffes are jerky giants.  (Max)
Tigers tip-toe to town.  (Venessa)
Gigantic giraffes greedily grill grapefruit.  (Kate)
Pandas proudly prance to Paris.  (Toby)
Sneaky spiders snatch snails silently.  (Jenaya)
Each elephant eats earrings for Easter.  (Josie)
Lazy lion drinks lumpy lemonade.  (Ryan)
Flashy fish float flowers and flick flies. (Hamish)
Awkward orcas obey odd octopus.  (Lucie)
Baby birds balance bouncy balls on their beaks.  (Abby)

4 comments:

  1. Awesome alliterations! What wonderful words, scintillating, spectacular sentences, by champion children :)

    Konica

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  2. It was really fun making alliteration poems they were so easy when you used a dictionary.Josie:)

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  3. Wall done room 4. Thank you Mrs may and Mrs o for teaching us how to write alliteration poetry.Venessa

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