Friday, September 20, 2013

Poetry

Room 4 have been enjoying experimenting with a variety of different poetry styles and elements.  Today we all chose one poem that we wanted published on the blog.  These are all poems that are special to us.  Happy reading!

Love
Love is getting hugs from your mum and dad and Kelly.
Love is playing with your sisters and brothers.
Love is snuggling with your pets.
Love is watching the sunset.
Love is the best feeling in the world.
Venessa

Anger
Anger is when my Mum tells me off.
Anger is getting growled at, at school.
Anger is getting woken up in the morning.
Anger is when someone breaks my arm.
Anger is when someone tells me to do something.
Hamish

Lucie
Lucie is a really good gymnast.
Who feels sad when she hurts herself when she falls off the beam.
Who needs to learn handsprings and land in the bridge.
Who wants to take gym more seriously.
Who fears gym competitions when the judges stare at her.
Who would like to keep on doing gym.
Lucie

Mum
Mum is a nice lady.
Who feels happy when it's her birthday.
Who needs her children around her.
Who wants her kids.
Who fears rats.
Who would like to win lotto.
Lucy

Blake
Blake is an amazing rugby player.
Who needs to be a great rugby player at every game.
Who wants to become an All Black.
Who feels sad when he doesn't make it into the All Blacks.
Who would like to be a flanker in rugby.
Blake

Happiness
Happiness is the hydroslide.
Happiness is fighting with my sister.
Happiness is Christmas morning.
Happiness is my ponies.
Happiness is missing school.
Happiness is going farming.
Happiness is my birthday.
Happiness is gymnastics.
Happiness is dancing.
Rubie

Dion
Dion Bell is a good farmer.
Who feels annoyed when the stock get out.
Who needs a day off.
Who wants to have a boy.
Who fears when dogs run away.
Who would like to win Lotto Powerball.
Lanie

Mossburn
Mossburn
Big stag
Lovely sunny weather
Nice holiday camping ground
Warm
Jessica

Happiness
Happiness is going on my motorbike.
Happiness is Christmas morning.
Happiness is getting a pet.
Happiness is winning a race.
Happiness is hugging my dog.
Happiness is sleeping in bed.
Happiness is scoring a goal.
Happiness is LOVE!
Max

Dad
Dad is an awesome farmer.
Who feels happy when his dogs do what he says.
Who needs to fix his fences
Who wants to have a break.
Who fears nothing.
Who would like to be a billionaire.
Connie

Sadness
Sadness is being alone.
Sadness is getting my name under the sad face.
Sadness is losing a family member.
Sadness is failing a test.
Sadness is breaking up with someone.
Sadness is losing a favourite toy.
Sadness is what I'd rather forget!
Toby

Spoodles
Spoodles
Fluffy, energetic
Fast, floppy ears
Dances like a maniac
Puppy
Abby

Josie
Josie is an active kid.
Who feels proud when she has just run a race.
Who needs to be on the go all the time.
Who wants to learn the guitar.
Who fears being left alone.
Who would like to be a nice girl for her whole life.
Josie

Jenaya
Jenaya is a good athlete.
Who feels excited on Christmas Day.
Who needs a part for her motorbike.
Who wants a pony or horse.
Who fears spiders.
Who would like to be a hose riding teacher.
Jenaya

2 comments:

  1. Wow, love your poems Room4, you will have to show your Dad your poem Connie, maybe he's still outside fixing fences!! Sally - Connie's Mum

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  2. These poems are fabulous Room 4. You have done such a great job of these and they are very special. I hope all of your parents read them to see how clever you are!! Gillian - Alyssa's Mum

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