Alesana has been producing some outstanding pieces of writing lately. We have been particularly impressed by the exciting vocabulary choices that he is making. It certainly makes his writing a delight to read!
Here's a little taster of Alesana's work....
"Do I have to go Mum?" I whinged, as we walked into the doctor's waiting room. Mum was too busy reading a magazine. We were there for 13 minutes. Then a person came out.
"Can I please have Alesana". I sank. But I got up and limped. We got into the doctor's room and I could see sharp tools. "Please hop on the bed". I could hear my heart pounding and I grimaced in pain. She picked up a pointy tool. It got closer and closer. Scarier and scarier. Then POP! A one second flash of blood splattered everywhere, like an open sea.
"Ahhhhh" I yelled. But it did not really hurt.
"Here's a lollipop" said the doctor.
Well done Alesana you deserved it.
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