Metaphor Poems

This week in Room 4 we have been investigating metaphor as a way of writing. We have been using things that we are like to help to describe us. Today we wrote a poem about our class and everyone helped to write it. This is our poem:

Room 4 is a bag of fruit burst lollies,

all sweet but different flavours.

We are a fast, noisy, Mustang; all going places.

We are a cherry blossom tree, sweet, kind, bursting with colour and standing out from the rest.

We are Gabriel’s Gully because we are gold, special

and beautiful.

We are a club sandwich; all types that stick together

and combine perfectly.

We are skins shorts; sporty, fast and very smooth.

We are Room 4.