Friday 25th May - a few samples of today's five minute Quick Write
“Stop”. I’m getting stomped on. Yuck, I don’t want to die. I hold my tiny claw up. I hear a humongous trumpet from the elephant. Thump. “Ow” I’m covered in mud, grass and heaps of poo from the ground all around. Yuck! - Abby.
Smashing, crashing, banging and thump, thump, thump is all I hear around me. A ginormous shadow crowds me. I run and jump at the same time the thumping and jumping follows as I run. And there is the ginormous animal crowding me - George
No, don’t step on me. But it was too late. Squash! I... couldn’t... believe I was going to die. Bll! This is the end of this mouse. - Toby
“Rrrr.” There is an elephant. I go “Rrrrr” again. I said to myself ‘I am going to die’. If I could push the elephant’s foot... but it didn’t work because it was too heavy for a little mouse like me.... Jenaya
As I walk across the grassy lands of Africa I see a huge, ginormous elephant even bigger than me. You see I can get stomped on so easily because I’m really small and tiny. As I run as fast as I can, he spots me just like a witch. So I went on the tree stump and introduced myself. “Hi, I am called mouse. Who are you?” - Jessica
Aaaaaah you’re squashing mmmmmmeeeehhh. Get off meeeee. Please just get off. I’ll give you peanuts. Just get off! Phew he’s off. Oh no here comes a big herd of elephants! I sprint but then.... Connie
“What are you doing to me? I don’t want to be squashed and stomped by big foot. Call the cops. Wait there are no cops in animal life. I hate this place.” - Blake
What on earth is going on? I am getting squashed by an elephant. I’m going to die. This is freaky. I hate this place... Max
What am I doing? I have a big paw and I am about to get squashed. Oh no..... Lucy S
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