Monday, March 25, 2013

Happy or Excited? - Quick Write



The little girls eyes are scrunched in a ball. She’s smiling that means she’s happy. Her hands are curled in a ball. Her shoulders are up because she is so happy. She can not stop smiling. - Lucy

Her eyes are as tight as she can possibly close them. She has a cheeky, happy, huge smile on her face. Her fists are clenched. Her shoulders are peeking up to the sky. She looks like she is going to fly. - Jessica

The little girls eyes were scrunched up, closed like she was making a wish. She had a gigantic smile that was a big as a melon with teeth as white as can be. Her little hands were put together and her shoulders were scrunched up to her head. She was so excited she couldn’t even talk. - Samara

Hey eyes are shut like a happy girl. Her smile is cheeky. Her hands are praying. Her shoulders are being up. She is so excited that she is going to explode. - Lanie

The little girls eyes are scrunched up. Her smile is so big you can see her teeth. The little girl’s scrunched up. Her shoulders are freezing. The little girl’s so excited she can’t stop smiling. - Paris

The little girl’s eyes are closed. Rubie’s smile looks like she has been up to something. Rubie’s hands are clenched. She is rubbing her fists together. Her shoulders are as high as I have ever seen them. - Rubie

The little girls eyes are shut with excitement. She has a really cheeky smile and scrunched up hands. It looks like she is going to punch. Her shoulders are peeping over like they’re a ghost. She is so excited. - Josie

A young two year old is so excited that her uncle and aunty are coming. There goes the doorbell. They’re here. Sydney starts to rub her fists together. Her hands look like she’s in a boxing fight. Her mum opens the door. In walks Aunty and Uncle. They have a big present that is about 1 metre long. Sydney runs to the door. She says, “What’s that Aunty?” “It’s for you.” Sydney starts opening it. It is a rocking horse. -  Lucie

A girls is jumping on a trampoline. Her face is happy. She looks like her face is going to explode. She is getting redder and redder by the second and now her her face is redder than a volcanic eruption in Auckland. Her hair blows against the wind like a jet plane fighter. Phew the missiles are going faster than ever! - Alesana

The little girls eyes are shut and scrunched up tight. I can see baby teeth poking out. The little girls fists were rubbing together. Her shoulders are up by her face. The little girls face was all scrunched up. - Alyssa

Her eyes are scrunched up with happiness. Her smile looks very big. Her hands are very tight. Her shoulders are very high to her ears. She will explode. - Amber Rose

Her eyes are tight shut and it looks nice. Her smile is really nice. Her hands are like she has scrunched up fists. - Ryan

The girls eyes are shut and scrunched up. her smile is wide open and all you can see is her teeth. Her hands are not hands they are fists. Her shoulders are in her head. She looks like she is laughing ‘cause someone is tickling her. - Hamish

The girls eyes look like two pieces of scrunched up paper. her smile is a cheeky mischievous smile with little teeth sticking out. She has hands clenched up as fists. Her shoulders are up with excitement. Do you know why she is excited? Well, because it was her birthday. - Abby

The little girls eyes are scrunched up. Her smile is a juicy huge smile. Her hands are like they are stuck together. Her shoulders are up high. She looks like a nice friendly little dog. - Emma


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